When I was reading this I can picture this in my mind, how sad and depressing it is it's not a bad thing). I like the way you use descriptive words to describe the feeling of the story.
I like how you remember your dreams and can write it down, because I can’t remember any of my dreams. I think you should keep a dream journal and write down as many dreams as you can remember and one day create a book about one of them. These dreams/stories are very interesting
I like the way you described how you feel and the way you said "Hearing the Whi