Monday, November 21, 2011

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When I was reading this I can picture this in my mind, how sad and depressing it is it's not a bad thing). I like the way you use descriptive words to describe the feeling of the story.

http://gisellenoel.blogspot.com/2011/10/setting-and-moods.html#comments

 I like how you remember your dreams and can write it down, because I can’t remember any of my dreams. I think you should keep a dream journal and write down as many dreams as you can remember and one day create a book about one of them. These dreams/stories are very interesting

http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/emilyl66/random-dreams/#comment-6

 I like the way you described how you feel and the way you said "Hearing the Whi

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